Really fun read, enjoyed experimenting with the choices and seeing all the different endings! I almost missed that the title screen changes depending on what you do, its very subtle but a really cool effect! I'm not sure if I managed to see every version of each ending, as there seems to be small variations depending on choices, but I did get the secret ending, so that was fun, haha!
Unless I missed something, it felt like the plot with the uncle and dad doesn't really go anywhere, which is a little bit of a shame, but I get the focus is on the possession and Callum's story more than that.
Minor nitpicks aside, I had a lot of fun with this VN, and I'd love to see what you come up with in the future!
Thanks for reading! The dad’s mission is a bit of a backdrop here, but the bigger VN I’ve been working on for a few months takes place in the same universe and focuses on that point (with different characters, to be clear).
Here’s a list of endings for curious people.
All endings>
1, 2, 3, 4a, 4b, 5, hidden
As you can see, only ending 4 really has alternatives. (depending on whether you twinkified Callum or not) Other endings have variance in some text, but the ending itself is the same so I didn't consider them different.
The hidden ending didn't work on version 1.0 but does in 1.1. Here's a hint if you want it.
Spoiler on how to get hidden ending
You just need to finish ending 2 and one of 3, 4 or 5, then go the route that leads to ending 2 to see a new choice. If you have played version 1.0, finish ending 2 again to trigger it. (and then go back at the beginning of the last loop of ending 2)
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This one's good!
SPOILERS BELOW
A time-loop horror story about a demonic possession handled by the reader. VERY nice!
The writing is pretty good, the characters make sense, the jokes were good, the lose of self-control of the main character was disturbing.
All in all, great execution!
Honestly, if this had a tiny bit of extra polishing and had custom music and art it would be perfect.
Really fun read, enjoyed experimenting with the choices and seeing all the different endings! I almost missed that the title screen changes depending on what you do, its very subtle but a really cool effect! I'm not sure if I managed to see every version of each ending, as there seems to be small variations depending on choices, but I did get the secret ending, so that was fun, haha!
Unless I missed something, it felt like the plot with the uncle and dad doesn't really go anywhere, which is a little bit of a shame, but I get the focus is on the possession and Callum's story more than that.
Minor nitpicks aside, I had a lot of fun with this VN, and I'd love to see what you come up with in the future!
Thanks for reading! The dad’s mission is a bit of a backdrop here, but the bigger VN I’ve been working on for a few months takes place in the same universe and focuses on that point (with different characters, to be clear). Here’s a list of endings for curious people.
All endings>
1, 2, 3, 4a, 4b, 5, hidden As you can see, only ending 4 really has alternatives. (depending on whether you twinkified Callum or not) Other endings have variance in some text, but the ending itself is the same so I didn't consider them different.I got endings 1,2,3,4, 4b and the jordan one
didn't realize there was a hidden ending
The hidden ending didn't work on version 1.0 but does in 1.1. Here's a hint if you want it.
Spoiler on how to get hidden ending
You just need to finish ending 2 and one of 3, 4 or 5, then go the route that leads to ending 2 to see a new choice. If you have played version 1.0, finish ending 2 again to trigger it. (and then go back at the beginning of the last loop of ending 2)